Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Santa Paws


This is a book about a very tiny puppy whose Mum used to be a home dog but one day her owners left her so that is how she became a street dog. The tiny puppy had six brothers and sisters. One day the puppy had a major sleep in and when he woke up his brothers and sisters weren't there so he was just about to go looking for them when he heard voices. He went and hid in the shed where they all usually sleep. All of a sudden the puppy hit a rake and the policemen heard him. So they went a little closer to the shed and the dog came further forward. One of the men had a sandwich and was trying to get the dog to come out and see them. Any way the next day he went off for to search for his family. It was getting late and the puppy had been searching all day for his family but he had no luck. So he found a nice place to sleep but it wasn't as comfy as him sleeping with his family. When he woke up he heard voices from above was a boy and his friend there names where Oscar and Gregory. Gregory really liked the puppy because his other puppy had just died. Then after a while the bell rang for Gregory and Oscar to go back inside the school. The puppy waited for a while but his friends didn't come back out so he went on his journey to find his family. He went down Main Street but all he saw was crowds of people setting up decorations so he found a nice bundle of straw to go to sleep in for the night. In the middle of the night he woke up to noise's down behind the decorations of Jesus and the three wise men was lots of laughter. All at once the puppy knew that there was nothing but trouble so the puppy went up to all the laughter. After a couple of steeps he kept on stopping to make sure he was just dreaming. Then when he reached the decorations he saw some boys that he had meet at the school who were big bully's they had spray paint and were destroying everything. The puppy started barking and the kids thought they were a big sukey puppy that was just wanting to play. But then the boys heard the police car pulling in they knew it was them because they were always up to lots of trouble. After the puppy was so hungry so he went back to the school to see if the rubbish bins were open and they were so he had a huge feast and then went to where he had sleeped that night when he woke he heard the sound of voices it was Gregory and Oscar wanting to play with him. All of a sudden he heard crying from the car park he lead the boys where there was crying and there was a lady with four children and they were all sick with the flu. The boys told them that they should be at there house but they didn't want to go back for some reason. Any way they were on there way back to the school when all of a sudden the princalpel of the school came out and both the boys got detention then someone came along and saw the little puppy and taught him some tricks then Gregory came out and said what are you doing here Patrica it was Greggory's big sister any way she was there to pick them up so they left the little dog and went home. The puppy had started to get thristy and went down to the pizza place and water was dripping out of the tank so after a nice cooling drink and went and settled down for a nap. That night he went and had a look at the people that he had found in their car they were know with another family putting up the Christmas tree. The puppy wished that he was with his family right then and stared to wimp. All of a sudden he Saw a Christmas sleigh in the mall and he went there for the night. When he woke up he heard lots and lots of voices and a big fat man got into the sleigh that smelt like bacon and egg. Then he heard Oscar's voice and they saw him and Gregory saw him and showed his mum. That night they had a big conversion about keeping the dog and when he got to there house he didn't think this would happen but his family was living with Oscar's family and they lived happily ever after.
This is a very good book but it is sad in some parts.Written by Nicholas Edwards

9 comments:

  1. that dog sounds so cool. where is the picture??? Dylan :-)

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  3. Hi Tenny I feel sorry for you today you should of said something to Mrs Cunninghum she would of been fine if you just said something anyway I bet Bradley and Dylan didnt read it Dylan said that the dog does look so cute and the picture was'nt even there. I might invite you over sometime your a great friend. lovely caring and kind what else can I say EVERYTHING AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME!

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